Tuesday, 20 January 2015
6 Degrees of Connection
At the end of 2013 I was commissioned by Tyneside Cinema to write and perform a poem as part of a conference about young people and engagement in specialised cinema. You can read about the event here.
It was a pleasing mixture of fun and terror writing a poem based on the conference as the conference happened. Since then we have developed a publication which combines a revised version of the poem, alongside prose which summarises some of the learning from Tyneside Cinema's Young Tyneside programme and the evaluation of it by Morris Hargreaves McIntyre, which can also be downloaded from the Tyneside's website here. This was published in 2014 but for some reason I did;t put this blog up then. Better late than never.
The publication, Six Degrees of Connection: Towards the Absolute Alrightness of the Kids, can be downloaded from the Tyneside's website or in the Publications section of the Thinking Practice site.
The poem got shorter after the actual event because it takes longer to write something short than something long, as anyone who's tried to write something good knows.
Video evidence of the reading of the original version exists, but I'm not telling you where. It probably goes without saying, but I am very up for being asked by others to do this sort of thing in interesting places and interesting situations.
The Infinite Town
Above is a photograph of a poem I was commissioned to write by Stockton-on-Tees Borough Council. It is inscribed in a large plinth on the High Street, part of a huge redevelopment of the town centre. From the summer, an automata in the shape of a train will arise from the point (once a day, in Trumpton-style).
The poem was one of a number I wrote in response to the commission, and was chosen by the panel overseeing the redevelopment. The poem had to do a number of things (some for the commission, some for me):
- Be memorable but not too simplistic - some people will see this a lot and I wanted it to strike them differently over time
- Have local relevance and reference, but not be backwards looking
- Not be trite
- Have a slightly 'civic' tone
- Have a kind of density to it.
So if you know Stockton you may pick up references to the Infinity bridge, which you can just about see from the plinth, the Tees, and the town's firework tradition. (Starting with the invention of the safety match.) It was also, of course, part of the birth of railways.
I actually did't know this was in place when I first saw it, on a shopping trip just before Xmas. I think it looks rather handsome, if I may say so myself. It's also a rather odd feeling to see your name in such a permanent-looking site.
It was very kind of the Council to put a big bow on it too. I think this was just for Xmas:
Sunday, 11 May 2014
Poetry Salzburg Review review
Michael Blackburn has written a very interesting, and generous, review of How I Learned to Sing in Poetry Salzburg #25. It's part of a long essay so I've not copied it all out. There are a few choice paragraphs below, use technology to read the images if you want to see the full thing.
I like the idea of being part of 'the airbrushed Great Poetry Surge' but should point out I presume Michael means airbrushed out… I don't think we used Photoshop to look thinner. (Might be a good idea now, though…)
"With his influential magazine, Scratch, as
well as his own poems, Mark Robinson was one of the original participants of
the airbrushed Great Poetry Surge of the 1980s and 1990s (forget about the ‘New
Generation’ stuff – that was the metropolitan establishment waking up to what
they’d failed to see and which they’d played no part in producing). When he
progressed from vegetarian chef to arts administrator, turning from
metaphorical poacher to gamekeeper, he took a decade-long self-imposed
sabbatical from publishing his work. For the poetry world this was a loss, but
with this excellent collection from Smokestack Books we can catch up with what
we missed.
‘The world is a place that has changed and
I need your help’ the poet says in one of his earliest pieces, and it could be
taken a primary motif of all of his work. Robinson has become a chronicler not
just of his personal life – marriage, children, getting older – but also of the
society in which he lives.
….
For me, the great strength of his work is
the straight-forward human warmth it demonstrates… If you ant to get the best
of Robinson, I do not think you can do better than ‘My Love’, which is one of
the finest contemporary love poems I have read, and exactly as Milton said
poetry should be, simple, sensuous and passionate – and economically short,
deploying clear images and a sure sense of rhythm and pace: ‘Such a long time
ago now, and nothing to be done,/ which is why I bring you fruit and drink and
hope.’
As Pound wrote in Canto 81, ‘What thou
lovest well remains, / the rest is dross’; and with this poet’s talent and our
luck what remains is a poem like that.’ "
Sunday, 27 April 2014
Poetry cushions anyone?
When a poem is published, it's no longer yours. The downside is you often feel it has expired somewhere just round the corner. The upside is that sometimes poems take on a life of their
own. Or more precisely, readers give them life beyond their published form or
the rites of performance. They pass them on. They anthologise them. They do
surprising things with them. They take them into their own lives.
This has happened to me a couple of times. Once,
my poem ‘Buttocks’ was used in a Longman school book, in a compare and contrast
exercise with a poem by Louis Macneice and ‘The Road Not Taken.’ That was a
surprise when I read it. (One question asked ‘Do you think this poem is any
less serious than the other two?’) Happily, it does allow me to say teenagers
have been compelled to compare my ‘Buttocks’ to Robert Frost…
I was thinking of this because I recently had an email from someone about my
poem ‘Domestic Bliss’. They explained why they were getting touch:
More
than 10 years ago now I read and loved 'Domestic Bliss'. I studiously copied it
and ever since it's been displayed in many, many forms, from framed italics to
embroidered cushions in every house (and country) I've lived in. I never took
note of the writer so till now it's been anonymous and, each time it is reborn
I have a quick Google in the hope of finding out who wrote it and what else
they might have done (if I love this so much, what if the writer has
more?)
The person had found the poem on Anthony Wilson’s Live-Saving Poems blog – where its inclusion and Anthony’s kind words had been
a lovely thing in itself. You can read Anthony’s blog here.
Now, if I’d been Wendy Cope, who has written about how reciting poems should earn a royalty for the writer, I might have
sent an invoice and a stroppy note. (Goodness knows how much she’d want for something
almost permanent like an embroidered cushion.) But I was delighted the poem that
started life in my head 20-odd years ago had meant so much to someone without
my knowledge. Becoming Anonymous but part of someone’s life seems a better
aspiration for me as a poet than holding on so tightly. Maybe this just goes to show I'm not a proper poet. Maybe
if it happened more often I’d feel differently, but I doubt it. (I believe in
home taping too, by the way…)
I don’t write poems to commission for nothing, unless its for family and friends and I’d be
unhappy if you photocopied the whole of How
I Learned to Sing to give to someone.
(It would cost you more than the book, mind.) But if you photocopied your favourite poems to
paper your loo, I’d be rather chuffed, though a little surprised. I may look
into ‘Domestic Bliss’ tea towels though…
Anyway, here is the poem. As Tammy Wynette sang,
there’s No Charge….
Domestic Bliss
The mess gets worse as the beautiful world
tries harder, expands on its original
mistake –
something crass blurted out in a fluster –
making a mountain out of moleshit.
You and I aren’t bothered. Too busy to
beat the wolves from the doorstep, too
tired
to be pissed off about anything, tonight
the blackcurrant wine is dying our tongues
the colour of our hearts. We’re saying what
we mean,
for once, and it feels good, making plans
for the future as if there were no
tomorrow.
Your smile leaps out from behind your
teeth.
We can do whatever we want.
What we want to do now is
get sordid in front of the fire.
The world is hard but worth it.
PS: None of this should be interpreted as not
supporting the right of artists to get paid properly for their work. a-n and air are doing sterling work on this at the moment, which you
should read about here.
Saturday, 15 February 2014
Sir Tom Finney
In How I Learned to Sing, there are a couple of sestinas for my dad. The 2nd tries to capture something of one of my favourite things in life: walking up to Deepdale, home of Preston North End, with my dad. I tried to make it a bit like a poem version of an animation in which we morph from me as a child to me leading him, now a slower and older man. I wanted to pull off that lee Hall trick of it being full of feeling and sentiment without it being sentimental. I didn't want anything 'clipped' though: it is a risky gesture, and not for me to say if it came off.
I share the poem below, as I dubbed it a 'Finnale: ancient Lancastrian verse form, a sestina mentioning Sir Tom Finney' and Sir Tom passed away last night aged 91. There's no need for me to say much about what a great man he was, and how sad that is. For North End supporters, I think he's always been a kind of grandfather figure. It's sad he never got to see PNE back in the top flight. I love the photograph above for all sorts of reasons, some of which are also wrapped up in the poem.
2nd sestina for my Dad, a Deepdale Finnale
I
march as if catching up, feet off the ground
across
every gutter, from the bus station, my Dad
swerving
me through ginnels he used to walk
with
his gang from Lady Street, demolished now, toward a win,
but
only for the police horses on the terraces as we lose,
then
make our way back through fight-littered streets
that
now glow in the dark, suddenly glamorous streets -
one
set of expectations drowning another, grounds
for
a Saturday night on the tiles as I lose
him
in the crowd, squeeze back to the barrier and there’s Dad
leant
where he can hardly see, dreaming of pools wins
and
telling his friend the boss exactly where to walk,
how
one day we’d drive there, stop short to walk
from
Nan’s penultimate nursing home through streets
a
shimmer of redbrick fresco into sunlit wind,
make
our way across Moor Park’s muddy ground
hopeful
and joking, sometimes with my Mum, Dad’s
being
dragged there something we did together, lost
when
her legs would not support her, when to simply lose
was
harder than it had ever been to make that slow walk
through
optimism and renewal, to find in my Dad
imagined
grit of those proud sheepish workers’ streets
turned
into short lets, passing through drugged ground
where
the roar for late equalisers sounds like a win
to
wretched early leavers too eagerly taking wing,
his
shot knees cracking shut to slow him, mine loose
as
ever, dragging my son now, hopeful
that the ground
floodlit
ahead might hold a game that would let us walk
away
brightly, with only praise, only laughter, through streets
rivering
with victors around us as we wait for Granddad,
eddies
of history, generations of anticipation, all that Dad
disdained
to climb so high to see, an echo of a Finney win
blowing
these foggy memory-streaked streets,
full
of everything all of us will one day lose,
someone
who remembers the ancient trail we walk
towards
who knows what, away from the very ground
that
taught Dad how to teach me to lose
the
desire to always win, to find a line to walk
through
tight-woven streets, mapping memory’s home ground.
Finnale: ancient Lancastrian
verse form, a sestina mentioning Sir Tom Finney
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